This was going to be the book cover for an upcoming book 'Ursus in the Shadow of the Bear' (by David Randall) but, it didn't quite fit. So it will probably become a back cover, although I'm still unsure of it... it looks to detailed to be a back cover, and it's gonna be covered up by words anyway.

I'm not exactly sure when the book is coming out, but soon I promise. (sometime after I get the real cover done.)

If you have any hints or suggestions on what I could have done better, that would be nice.

By the way, this is from one of my favorite scene's (in Ursus). Don't read if you don't want spoilers, even minor small itty bitty spoilers. (I'm way picky about tiny spoilers))
Clovermead is in a dream, sharing the same one with Snuff (Cause she's just talented enough to get into other's dreams.) and he takes her through a temple like place that he'd destroyed and asks her to help him find a stained glass window. Once finding it, they put it back together like a puzzle, and shows a jester who had stolen stuff and was going to hang himself to pay for his sins, but their Lady (The Lady is their god) is holding his hand, trying to give him a second chance.
I didn't draw it exactly as it was written, cause I couldn't make it work exactly, so I did it more, symbolically.
Here in the image, originally it was going symbolize before and after Snuff had destroyed it. But we changed it to be just destroyed.